Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Frozen Overture

It was three then—
You nestled your nightmares into my lap and crooned.
With fingers of frozen mist I stroked your hair
And pried open your clenched fists.
I sang to your closed eyes
Anchored in my tune
I thought I was safe.

It was three when—
I had wanted you to show me the vacant moon
In the only way I knew how.

Its three now—
You know mist thaws
Once your fingers have warmed.
And mine weren’t even human.

2 comments:

pritha said...

its very real,
like action unfolding in vacant space..

Anoo. said...

You nestled your nightmares into my lap and crooned.
With fingers of frozen mist I stroked your hair
And pried open your clenched fists.
I sang to your closed eyes
Anchored in my tune
I thought I was safe.


beautiful lines! the image flows from oner verse to the other, but the last line is awesome...